Improvements after 1st Feedback

After the feedback, we did a few things to improve our video. 

We have changed the narrative a bit so it makes sense. We have added more shots of how Matilda met John (second guy) so he didn't just appear out of nowhere. We have also changed the shots at the park with John so the audience don't just see the back of them. We have also added a shot of Matilda crossing out a heart on a mirror to suggest that she is over Toby (first guy).

Secondly, we have filmed another performance in a different location with different shots so we can cut them in between the long shots and make the video snappier and fun. We have also switched some of the shots so the audience get the scene from more angles. 

Some of our peers have picked up on how some parts of our video are not in sync so we tried to fix that by going through the whole video and making sure everything is in sync. However, during this process we have realised it is the way Matilda sings that makes it look like it is not in sync so we could not do anything about it.