For our first rough cut, we went round as a group to look at other music videos from our classmates and give them feedback on what is good and what they could do to improve it.
These are the feedbacks we received from them.
From these feedbacks we have realised...
Pros
- Special effects is good
- Narrative was interesting
- Artist performance fits well with music
- Good locations
- Fantastic Performances and Colour used
Cons
- Some shots were too long
- Some of it wasn't in sync
- Cafe scene doesn't look much like a cafe
Our teacher also gave us comments on the rough cut and they said the narrative was a bit confusing - they didn't know why there were 2 guys in it. They also said the cafe scene didn't look like a cafe and shots are too long.
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