Thursday 19 March 2015

2nd Feedback from Peers

After the improvements we made, we had another rough cut review as a class.

Here are the feedbacks we got from them this time.



From these feedbacks we found...

Pros
- Special effects is good
- Narrative is clear
- Good use of colours (match genre well)
- Good Costume Choices
- Good Camera Shots

Cons
- Some shots were too long
- The mirror with lipstick scene is too dark/dull
- Need more variety of shots and more movement
- Phone part was too long

Some of them again said it was out of sync but others said synchronisation was good so we are certain that it is just the way Matilda sings that makes it look a bit out of sync.

This time our teachers said that we should edit more on the beat so shots cut when it needs to and that will keep it entertaining throughout. They also picked up in the colourisation of the mirror scene to be a bit dull but overall they think it was good.

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